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Just a small little drawing of my mouse character, Talon Lardner. Drawn over a few days, I think this turned out far better than I thought it would. It's not too late for any critiques, though.

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:iconezekel:
looks good overall, but one thing that comes to mind is how straight your/his chest is (and legs too)
one other thing, this is more of a personal preference though, think about making your face a little more anthro. for one it lets your glasses sit on it easier/naturally and for another it allows you to do facial features easier (e.g. a human like smile).

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My mind is quicker then your eyes!
Never fight what you cannot see!!!
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:icondemonicwhitedragon:
MMmm, I would have to say the arms look a little long compared to the rest of the body, Maybe make the muzzle a little smaller, Other then that it looks pretty nice, And don't be afraid to add folds to the clothing, it can make a world of differance
:iconconfusedcious:
I like it ^.^ I agree with the other guys too.

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Signatures are so last year.
:iconkid-kobold:
I think it's pretty neat. He looks deep in thought.

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June 13, 2006
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